Hello Melody, Ella F from St Patricks school in Greymouth, I really like how your speech is really in depth but maybe next time you could read the writing, but other than that I think your speech is really good!
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Hello Melody, Ella F from St Patricks school in Greymouth, I really like how your speech is really in depth but maybe next time you could read the writing, but other than that I think your speech is really good!
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